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©2003-2009 ~dancingdryad
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This is my submission to the Hidden Qualities contest. Many thanks to traerene [link] for her beautiful picture "Reverie" which inspired this poem.

It's kind of in an Irish folk song sorta style. It's also much longer than my poetry usually runs, and the first poem I've ever submitted to DA.

Due to some confusion about my submission, I'm adding the poem to the description box.

"Eyes Over Memory"

I stare out over memory
To a time that’s long since past.
And every year that’s come and gone
Is fading hard and fast.

‘Twas in my long lamented youth,
In lands across the sea.
Oh, come my young and hardy lass,
Sit here and pray for bitter me.

For long gone is that starlit isle,
The fields and glens I knew,
Where every perfect summer’s day
Had skies of endless blue.

I had me then a true love
And fair as night was he.
With hair as black as pitch or coal-
His eyes were stars to me.

Away across the sea he sailed
To heed great Fortune’s call.
I stood upon the beach that day
Until his ship grew small.

Two years I waited for my love,
For even some small word.
Not even a letter did I receive,
No news from him I heard.

I began to wait upon the shore
From dawn to setting sun.
My family begged me to forget-
I paid no heed to anyone.

One night as I lay tossed and turning,
Singing roused me from my bed.
I stumbled from my family’s home,
My heart was filled with awful dread.

As I made my way toward sand and sea
The singing grew more clear.
And with every word the singer sang
The deeper grew my fear.

The stars began to fade from sight
As night and day did meld.
I saw the Siren in the waves-
And ‘twas my lover that she held.

I plunged myself into the water,
My true love for to save.
The Siren, she but laughed at me
And slipped beneath the waves.

I found my true love in the surf
In the breaking of the day.
The stars were gone from in his eyes,
His skin a shade of gray.

My love was buried in the hills
Far from the sea and shore.
And me, I left my homeland
To see the ocean nevermore.

But listen here, me lassie,
The waves still haunt my mind.
And in my dreams, the Siren sings,
I fear no peace I’ll ever find.

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:iconminui:
I really like it. I wish I knew how to make something like that!!! :) (Smile)
:iconsilv3r:
It's beautiful....great work, I like what you did to the scene, the colors are really nice. Keep it up :) (Smile)

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:icondancingdryad:
To make things a bit clearer, my submission is a poem, not the picture. The picture is included as per the contest rules( I hope.) I know they said to include a thumbnail of the picture I chose to base my poem on. I wasn't exactly sure how to do that....

Just click on the picture to get to the poem.

All comments on the picture should be directed to it's creator, traerene. [link]

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:iconelindquist:
I love this POEM, Cedar. I'm sorry everyone else doesn't seem to get it...

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:iconoceanborn:
That's really pretty...it reminds me of a nightwish CD slip or something magical :-) (Smile)

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:icontraerene:
that is absolutely awesome!!! i think that's my favourite poem for this image yet! wow! such a unique style... truly creative and an interesting read!! wonderful work... i love it!!

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:iconbrackenfish:
Beautiful, just beautiful. You really matched your poem to the picture faithfully. I enjoyed the ending; the siren bringing back the lover was a great mechanism! Great work.

~Brack


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"If there's nothing wrong with me... maybe there's something wrong with the universe!" -- (Remember Me)
:icongyroscope:
it's cute, i like it.
:iconlimnersphere:
A yes, I am a sucker for a good and hearty Gaelic tales spun around love and loss. The description of her lover, the sailor, reminds me of the story of Deidre of the Sorrows, also a bittersweet tale. There is always something tantilizing about the old tales of the woman whose lovers were lost at sea. I guess it is because we hope with them that their love will return and there will be a happy ending. If the tale is good enough, we mourn the loss with them as they move through their sorrow. I can very well see this tale being sung at a English/Welsh/or Irish Pub. Cheers to a tale well told!;-) (Wink)

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